happy star wars day
tunnel down to where it’s warm
to embers glowing
almost cooled
spent but not quite overdrawn
assonant with meaning
un-signed, evoke the feeling
if no-one hears it’s empty
is the author’s death suspended
could there be a happy ending?
or is broken verse just shitty prose
a rose renamed still just a rose
(allude to christ, when he arose)
parenthesis to keep you guessing
break the meter
beg the question
falling into comfy cadences
arresting my descent